Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Vegetarianism is becoming more and more popular for many people, particularly because of the harm that some people believe meat can cause to the body. However, I strongly believe that it is not necessary for everybody to be a vegetarian.
Vegetarians believe that meat is unhealthy because of the diseases it has been connected with. There has been much research to suggest that red meat is particularly bad, for example, and that consumption should be limited to eating it just a few times a week to avoid such things as cancer. Meats can also be high in saturated fats so they have been linked to health problems such as cardiovascular disease and diabetes.
However, there are strong arguments for eating meat. The first reason is that as humans we are designed to eat meat, which suggests it is not unhealthy, and we have been eating meat for thousands of years. For example, cavemen made hunting implements so that they could kill animals and eat their meat. Secondly, meat is a rich source of protein which helps to build muscles and bones. Vegetarians often have to take supplements to get all the essential vitamins and minerals. Finally, it may be the case that too much meat is harmful, but we can easily limit the amount we have without having to cut it out of our diet completely.
To sum up, I do not agree that everyone should turn to a vegetarian diet. Although the over-consumption of meat could possibly be unhealthy, a balanced diet of meat and vegetables should result in a healthy body.
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Comments
You should begin by intoducing the topic. The introduction in this vegetarianism essay begins by mentioning vegetarians and the possible harm of eating meat.
It then goes on to the thesis statement, which makes it clear what the candidate’s opinion is.
The first body paragraph has a topic sentence which makes it clear that the paragraph is going to address the possible health issues of eating meat.
Some reasons and examples are then given to support this.
The second body paragraph then has a topic sentence which makes it clear that the main idea is now about the arguments for eating meat.
The conclusion in this vegetarianism essay then repeats the opinion and gives the candidates final thoughts.