Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undertaking scientific research is imperative if countries want to progress and compete in a globalized world. However, the funding and controlling of this research remain contentious issues. In my opinion, the government should have the predominant responsibility for these.
One of the first issues is the knowledge that we gain from research. If governments are responsible then they are driven by the need to make advances in knowledge in order to improve people’s lives. This is because they are accountable to the public and the research is paid for by taxes. On the other hand, private organizations are driven by profit. This may mean that some research that could be valuable to society may not begin because there is no monetary gain.
Another issue related to this is the research process. When the funding for research comes from the same organization that is going to gain from a favorable outcome, there is a strong potential for biased results. Taking drugs companies as an example, legislation usually requires rigorous trials for new drugs that can take many years to complete. The companies have large amounts of money invested in such research and the need for positive results is paramount. It is difficult for a scientist to remain impartial in these circumstances. However, if this is controlled and funded by governments, their accountability means that such conflicts of interest are less likely to occur.
On balance, I would argue that although it is not realistic to remove all opportunities for privately funded research, governments should have the main responsibility for the monitoring and controlling of this. Strong checks and balances need to be in place to ensure future research is ethical and productive.
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Comments
The essay is well organized.
The opinion is clearly presented in the introduction and this opinion is then supported in the body paragraphs and summarized again in the conclusion.
There are topic sentences which state clearly what each paragraph is about:
One of the first issues is the knowledge that we gain from research.
Another disadvantage related to this is the research process.
The body paragraphs then go on to develop each idea giving reasons and examples.
In the first body paragraph a comparison is made between the government and private sector in terms of knowledge.
In the second a comparison is made in terms of the research process.
There is no repetition of ideas.
There is some good use of high level vocabulary, phrases and collocations such as:
- imperative
- contentious
- accountable
- monetary gain
- favourable outcome
- rigorousparamountremain impartial
There is also a good mix of complex sentences with examples of adverbial clauses, relative clauses and noun clauses.