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If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
(a) If I ………..(am/are/were) an employer, I would hire a worker depend upon the type of the work that my organization deal with. There is many types of organizations that deal with different works like industry, restaurants, consultancy, banks, forum etc. And depend upon these types of organizations, the working personnel also vary. If I belong to the organization that worked for building and construction, and I require workers for the same purpose, then I am sure_y hire i_ex_erienced workers at a lower salry. By doing this I will make my organization more cost effective.As for building and construction purpose, more numbers of workers are requiring, and this helps cuting down expenses. Also, when the work is relating to the physical work, then more than experience, the desire to work count. If the person is inexperienced, then he can be learnt how to work, until he has been desired to work. But, if the organization is related to the professional levels, then in such case, experience workers are h_gh_y required. So, the type of the work is directly related to requirement of the experience or inexperience worker with respect to the amount of the salary. …… I am related with the international organization, I would preffer an experienced worker even at a higher salary.
Experience is ……. most important criteria for get
professional job. Experience makes the person perfects. And perfect …….. can
only work effective__ and efficiently they join the organization. Even for the
experienced person, it took some time to understand the way the organization
works and the management over there. So, for the in_xperience_ person, it takes
almost months to years to know the working atmosphere of the organization
depending upon the type of work. The total amount of the salry the worker gets
by the completion of work is almost same wheather the worker is experience or
inexperienced. Training is requiring for an inexperienced worker and the
training expenses can more. But for the experienced worker, training is not
required, two can just understand by observed, and managing oneself. The
experienced one can get the job done soon while, the inexperienced worker takes
double the time. Double the time means double the salary one gets. So, whether
one is experienced ……. not, total amount of the salary, the employer has to pay
is somewhat equivalent. Organization values its overall human resources, no
matter whomever; all are integral part for its existence. For the long-term development
and for the Excellenc_, experienced worker needs ……….hired.
I work in the international organization that deals with the e-consultation. If the inexperienced person was hired for the same job, then he would almost take 6 months to understand what’s going on. But if the person is experienced one, he needs not more than one month to get involved. For such an organization, Excellency is of prior than the amount of salary that is to be paid. Also, it’s not sure that even after training, the inexperienced person can work effectively. In the medical shop, if I have to hire the sales man than, I would go for the experienced one even at the higher salary. Experience is the most important criteria for employing as the work is related to the health of many people.
So in my point of view, experienced workers are more effective than inexperienced ones regardless of the amount.
Mark the main sentence, main verb, 2nd verb, 3rd verb (if any) and also extra part of the following sentence.
- it takes almost months to years to know the working atmosphere of the organization depending upon the type of work.
- So, whether one is experienced or not, total amount of the salary, the employer has to pay is somewhat equivalent
- Organization values its overall human resources, no matter whomever; all are integral part for its existence.
Rephrase the following Para in your words and also underline main verb & extra part of the sentence. If it is a complex sentence, then mark the conjunction:
I work in the international organization that deals with the e-consultation. If the inexperienced person was hired for the same job, then he would almost take 6 months to understand what’s going on. But if the person is experienced one, he needs not more than one month to get involved. Experience is the most important criteria for employing as the work is relates to the health of many people.
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