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IELTS Essay Writing Learning Test (EL05V6E71)

This exercise aims to give you an exercise to improve your sentence making, Vocabulary, understanding of meaning of Paragraphs, expressions, conjunctions, complex and passive sentences.there are errors in the essay.Find the errors and correct the essay.

This essay contains many errors.Correct the errors.

V6E71-If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Write the meaning of following sentences in Punjabi or Hindi.

  1. Almost every one of us at some point of our lives comes to the realization that
  2. we might have missed something on the way and
  3. we want to go back for a moment and take that thing before we continue.
  4. Many times this is expressed via the unexpected desire to study something we might have had the chance,
  5. but before we never took it.
  6. For me such thing is astronomy.
  7. It appeals to me in so many ways, the mystery that accompanies the science of the universe has always attracted me in some magic way
  8. but I never took my chance.
  9. Now, if I am given such, I will not hesitate much before I take and below are some of my reasons for doing so.

Re-phrase the following paragraph:

Astronomy is the science that tries to give us a more profound knowledge about the Universe – the unimaginably big world that we are just a tiny part of. It give us a better look at worlds that we’ve never imagined exist and within the whole picture it tries to explain our own existence the way it is. Every one of us has looked at the starry sky at night and at least a brief thought has come through out head of what’s there, what are all this flickering lights and is somebody waiting for us millions of lights years away. Thoughts like this have always made us feel a little bit better in our existence, a little bit less lonely in our universe and science like Astronomy is that one that proves our hopes true, to make the dreams reality.

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Find errors in following Paragraphs and correct it:

On the other hand, Astronomy help_ us to understand better who we is, where do we come from, what is our place in the big picture and how do we function as an entity within it. Let’s takes for example the studies on the structure of the matter in the u_iverse. Astronomers has proven the exi_t_nce of substances that we considered un__inkable before, and the knowledge they get from this invention go__ beyond the visible part in our o_n world, find the secr_ts of the ma__er that are hi__en deeply in its existence on earth. We should not also forget the recent discoveries regarding the Big Bang, considere_ the creation point of the Universe, the way we know __ today, and the help they provide us on understanding our origin as living bein__. It hel__ us understand where we are hea_ing for.

Taking all of the above mentioned, I can easi_y concluded that Astronomy for me is a way to broa_en my mind, a way to look beyond the visible part of the world I live in, a feeling of belonging somewhere in the whole picture of the universe and, most of all, astronomy was the knowledge that provides me with the confidence and hope that living beings on ___ are not alone in their existence.

Make Sentences using following words:

  • Broad
  • Broaden
  • Heading for
  • Feeling of belonging
  • Substance
  • Visible
  • Matter
  • Existence on earth
  • Starry sky
  • Look at

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